Zhon's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Survivor]

This is awesome. Instant follow. I love your style and color palette.

I agree with Syringes, the arms and hands could use a little bulking up, especially considering she looks like she knows how to handle that gun which I assume is rather heavy.

Also... I am jealous, you're the second person today that I have come across who bought a Cintiq recently. I want one so badly.

[Shit-Hole]

I really like your style. You're quite talented. Nothing bad to say about this drawing :)

[Horrorfying Girl]

This is pretty neat. Only thing I would say is watch the perspective of the hair in the background. It looks flat and like a last-minute add-on.

Otherwise I just love this drawing. Nice crosshatching, not much gradation in it but it works great for cel which seems to be what you were going for. I could easily see this in a comic or something.

This drawing is miles ahead of your other work. Keep it up.

NataushaM responds:

Thanks a bunch Zhon. I agree with the hair part. I at first wanted to have it curved like she would flip her head back. I'm still learning how to do foreshortening and hope to get better. Forgive me for asking but what is "cel"? I'm not good at decoding modern slang acronyms. Thanks again.

[Fulfillment of Ritual]

I actually really like the clouds. I think their expressively surrealist nature adds a lot to the piece and fits well with the rendering style of the figures at the bottom. They draw your eye back up towards the top of what is otherwise an extremely bottom-heavy image, creating a decent sense of balance.

If there is anything about this piece I don't like, it would be the composition. I feel like the statue should be just barely off center - either to the left or right, doesn't matter. Right would give it a more ominous feeling. Otherwise, this is five star illustration for sure!