Zhon's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

["Madness: Project Nexus" Cinematic Trailer]

10yo me would literally fucking die from watching this, good shit

[The Ultimate Showdown Collab]

fucking legends

[INFINITE GUITARS PREVIEW]

Holy fuck this looks cool. The world style kind of reminds me of the Digimon games on PS2. Are you going to put a demo up on Newgrounds? When do you expect it to release? Just wishlisted it!

[Miraculous Ladybug Marinette 2d Transformation]

This is "spot on" .... Get it... heh... :)))

Is this rotoscoped?

[Fish]

I'm really happy you put the robot clip in there. Also ya'll have some sweet skills with using effects and masking in animations. I'm not totally sure how to express what I'm trying to say - it's like FDS tends to be more playful with animation tools and methods than your typical animation. Visual delicacy.

[The Crown]

Gold.

I felt like the voiceover could have been a bit more compelling, but still heckin sweet. Good nice. Very welled.

[Continue the Story Collab]

All things considered it was pretty entertaining. Wish I had a bigger part in it now. Nice work fellas.

[Animation V.S Animator [Behind The Scenes]]

Keep it rollin man :) you gonna keep running with this one?
By the way, one trick you can use to speed things up if you do, is to copy+paste animations you use a lot (possibly even make them into graphic symbols so you can just drag + drop them on stage). Good example is stickman running animation - if he's just running across the screen, no need to animate it over and over again.

DavidProductions responds:

Good Advice! I use that method already but thanks for telling me thats actually da way tu du it xD
Thanks for being the 1st one here
Thanks man!

[blubery pi madness commercial]

This was pretty neat. You've got a knack for stop motion. I think there are two main things you could improve on.

1. Production quality - it already looks pretty good, but try to use a tripod (preferably with a remote shutter) to prevent camera movement, and also make sure your lighting is consistent by using manual exposure and keeping uninvolved shadows off your set.

2. Pacing - the joke was good at first, but I think it took far too long to get into the action. There wasn't enough substance to the joke for it to go on that long.

These are meant as constructive criticism - I did quite like the animation. I love stop motion in general! Following you :)

NoobClock666 responds:

can you plz help me with something.
i don't know how to put art that people can review on newgrounds
plz tall me i got no f&%king idea how people can review my art
if you can't tall me just get someone that knows to tall me